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Brokenstar death by Lillytehcat

Brokenstar death

by Lillytehcat


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I love Warriors a lot

Pros: The picture is nice and your pov of ThunderClan is great! The shading you you did is good too. The colors on Yellowfang and Brokenstar's pelts are spot on too. The bg is great and the orange sky instead of blue is is the first I've seen.

Cons: Why does Brokenstar's tail have exposed skin? His tail is bent not ripped. The background has shading but it looks like scribbles to me. Yellowfang should have more ragged fur. Plus a little bit more scars

Ok thanks for reading this. keep doing what you're doing Lilly
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